It reminds me of a certain Shakespeare play, come to think of it… Hmm. Proposing marriage at 17 years old after three days’ acquaintance is ludicrous. It goes kind of like this: “Hey, I just met you, and this is crazy, but I really love you, so marry me, baby.”Ĭue disgusted snorts and Nook-launching from my end. But, in any case, Ben then sang a song, and you all know the words. From a 17-year-old kid who’s having problems with a pre-existing girlfriend? No way.

What I had was that Ben tells Juliet that he knew after an hour that she was the person he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. In the first chapter, Juliet meets this guy named Ben, who was actually a really decent love interest with an angsty past and a troubled life (Jay is big on the angst, like I said.) I had no problems with Ben. This book takes place over a period of three days. This author is very good at getting emotions-particularly angst-across to the reader, but not in a lame, cheesy kind of way.īut obviously I didn’t completely love Juliet Immortal, and the number one reason was instalove.

I wouldn’t say it’s super poetic or earth shattering, but it was strong and well-presented, matching Juliet’s personality as a narrator quite well. Juliet Immortal does a great job balancing the paranormal stuff with everyday school stuff, and not once did I feel confused, annoyed, or anything else in the face of this plot’s progression.Īlso, I really enjoyed Jay’s prose. Stuff like a really nutso love pentagon (and, towards the end, a hexagon).Įven though I’m not exactly a huge fan of love geometry (I’m more for love via linear equations, algebra style), I was actually pretty impressed with Jay’s handling of everything. When both of their souls get transplanted into the bodies of modern American teenagers, stuff happens. Light battle that’s been going on since the beginning of time. Romeo murdered Juliet, sacrificing her soul for his own immortality, and now the two are locked on opposing sides of this huge Dark vs. Stacey Jay’s plot concept is really unique, as far as YA paranormal romance goes. Cut and dry of this is: fantastic, absolutely wonderful premise, prose, and characterization god-awful romance. I also don’t personally believe in soulmates, a theme that played a huge role in this book. Say what you like, but I don’t believe that real, lasting love happens after 1 hour of acquaintance. Unfortunately, when one is writing a book that’s a spin-off of the most infamous case of isntalove ever, there might be more problems.

And the majority of those attempts worked pretty well. Juliet Immortal made some pretty valiant attempts toward being a compelling novel.

Juliet immortal by stacey jay